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Wednesday, April 23, 2014
We're Losing Things Thoreau Thought Essential to Discovering an Identity: A Rhetorical Analysis
A heated debate between two
disparate parties of our developed world persists; the digital natives and the
digital immigrants cannot seem to cooperate, even as time ticks on and our
technology continues to advance. Harsh
criticisms volley back and forth – seldom rooted in fact – on both an
individual and group level. The digital
immigrants, who tend to belong to the older generation, fault the natives’
youth and inexperience for their refusal to recognize the intangible losses
their technological conveniences impose upon human interaction and dialogue. Because the immigrants appear to be a “dying
race,” the younger generations tend to disregard their unique perspectives on
the cultural impact of our rapidly evolving digital world. Rarely a written piece on the subject will
remain unbiased and offer valid critique of the opposing argument, but Sherry
Turkle’s comprehensive interview “We’re Losing Things Thoreau Thought Essential
to Discovering an Identity” did just that, as well as encouraging compromise
between the natives and immigrants.
As a psychologist and director of the
MIT Initiative on Technology and Self, Professor Turkle is well-versed on the
topic. According to her “About” page on
the MIT website, she is the author of several books on human-technology
interaction – including her most recent work Alone Together: Why We Expect
More from Technology and Less from Each Other. She holds a joint doctorate in sociology and
personality psychology. Her 2009
interview contributed to the small but notable database of the Digital Nation, a PBS project
investigating the effects of our new, digital world on the human psyche. Turkle discusses a wide range of issues in
her interview, the highlights of which are outlined on the sidebar of the
Digital Nation page as the following: Turkle’s termed “PowerPoint education,”
the effect of our digital world on families, the problems of the virtual world,
and the alterations her lecture styles have undergone due to her students’
digital distractions.
Rather than heavily criticizing the
widespread use of modern technology, Turkle utilizes her expertise on its
psychological consequences to provide solid evidence for her position. She relies on logical appeals throughout her
interview. Although she is highly
qualified to impart her knowledge onto her audience, Turkle hardly references
her credibility. Instead, she explains
her stance in a very linear way. She
begins by expressing her opinion or stating an observation and then builds off
of that. She moves fluidly from a
central idea to more specific concepts.
Her case is especially effective because of its presentation, but it
lacks the simplicity to attract the general population. The argument is presented by an intellectual,
for intellectuals – and because of this, there are little to no emotional
appeals as well. While Turkle’s opinion
is clear and she aims to convince her audience of the drawbacks of such complex
technology, her main goal is to incite the critical thinking skills of her
target audience.
Although Turkle doesn’t boast her
expertise, most of her argument relies on her own knowledge of the
subject. Much of the evidence for her
claims come from her own study and observation.
At one point in the interview, Turkle is asked about her fieldwork, to
which she responds, “My first work was on the one-to-one [relationship] of
person with computers. And then from 1995 on, I've looked at the computer as
the gateway to relationships with other people. Since 1995 I've been studying
adolescents and adults in connectivity culture, which is how I think of it --
studying gaming, virtual worlds and what began just with text-based virtual
worlds, and now it's moved on to things like Second Life, where you actually build worlds.” It’s clear from this statement that the
entire argument is based on the assumption that Turkle is an authority on the
subject. Therefore, the whole case is
founded on her credibility. Fortunately,
her logic is sound and it’s easy to accept her as an authority.
Because Turkle’s argument is so
intellectually constructed, most of the adult population would find it
difficult to follow. This was a poor
decision on Turkle’s part. Her audience
becomes limited to an academic audience – although this may have been her
intention. The subject matter of her
interview pertains to any technology user, but only a small number of consumers
can actually understand it. If Turkle
had wanted a larger audience, she should have simplified both her vocabulary
and her concepts.
While the interview is subjective by
nature, Turkle manages to appear open-minded and positive about our digital
future. Instead of condemning our new
technologies, she suggests a compromise between the digital natives and digital
immigrants. Her argument is thorough and
all-inclusive, which makes it convincing to those that understand it. However, Turkle does not anticipate her
interview to incite major reform – rather, she hopes to spark further
debate. Digital natives and digital
immigrants may never reach a consensus, but Turkle’s interview encourages her
audience to explore both points of view.
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